Midpoly Vehicle Contest - Alfa Romeo 159

#6
Xoliul said:
If you are also planning on doing an interior and/or engine (you should) then i think you could lose some polygon rows.
well i won`t be using that many all round, only where they are neede and the fender looked bad with less. i tried with fewer polies and added till it looked good...
 
#11
revelli said:
nice
but i have not repair that part in my post
and you can now delete some edges on side
i have already deleted 2 rows of polies from the fender, and could you be more specific on the other problem...?
 
#12
andrei check out my attachment

revelli meant the lines in green, moove them more forward, so your hood will get rounder.

check out the black line i painted, imo that extra poly row you have is very pointless, because if you have them or not, you will not notice a difference ;)

other than that it looks very nice :)
 

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#13
well i`ll surely fix the bonnet, but i added that row of polies for a reason: that part is not sharp and i wanted to get good and smooth reflections.

thanx for the tips :roll:
 
#14
hey mate...

hard to find andrei´s around the world! =P

good work on the alfa, and I agree with what people say, you shoud increase loops there..

otherwise you would get smoth problems on future...with chamfers...

maybe you could pull a loop of edges from that badge bump on the hood middle...
 
#15
andreisperid said:
hey mate...

hard to find andrei´s around the world! =P

good work on the alfa, and I agree with what people say, you shoud increase loops there..

otherwise you would get smoth problems on future...with chamfers...

maybe you could pull a loop of edges from that badge bump on the hood middle...
there`s plenty of Andrereis where i come from, there arent many of them around the internet and forums and stuff :)

more progress:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2927/7an2.png

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3816/8yb9.png

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9231/9sr4.png
 
#17
Looks good!
The rear light shape could use some adjustment, but overall the car seems to be pretty nice and accurate! Didn't have any super-close inspection, just pointing out what looked weird to me.





The green line is there only because it isn't smooth.

In fact... Even the drawing is a bit incorrect. The end of the rear light, which is closer to the center, is too tall... You might wanna lower it a bit.

And all my suggestions were based on THIS photo.
 
#19
hey m8 ive made some pics of my dads 159 a few days ago and olso took a pic of the rear light :)

shows the shape clearly

maybe a bit dark but just adjust brighnes in photoshop r something :p