Mercedes E-Class (W210) 50 AMG

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  1. blake_spector

    blake_spector Active Member

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    hi there, this is my current project, a mercedes e-class 50 amg

    since i kinda own this car (yet it's my dads car - but i will get soon ^^) i have a good reference making it accurate.

    c&c is very welcome =)

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    it looks like a good start.. but seams have to be sharper
     
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    hmm the seams look quite ok in my eyes.. but thanks anyway :D

    quick little update

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    very good start how did u get the silver material
     
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    thx, its a simple reflective vray material. i think the hdri reflections makes it look like that.
     
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    aaaah i want to have vray for xsi :(
    very nice start blake_spector
     
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    Great start.
     
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    really good start, i agree with MP5 about the seems though :)
     
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    very smooth work so far
    hdri makes wonders:) what are the names of your hdri in both scenes?
     
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    thx everybody :)

    seams not ok - seams ok 2:1 :grin:

    update (i'm not yet satisfied with the windshield reflections.. gonna fix)

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    this is just greate, you are pretty fast
    this will be top work
    can you answer to mine question?
     
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    oh please excuse my inobservance - of course i'll give you an answer.

    the hdri's are simple cloudy skies. i don't know of any specific name, i once renamed the .hdr's to my preferences - since then their names are sky0012.hdr and sky0023.hdr dunno if this will help you..
     
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    can we see some wires plus clay cuse the material and the reflections hide the bumps if there are any lol
     
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    Looks really good in my opinion :D
     
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    claytime :)

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    looks great, pefectly smooth :)
     
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    oh yeah ! :D Ilove this car, and the model is very smooth
    and you'r fast ! :D interesting how will u be making those side mirrors cuz I had a Lot problems in making them in correct shape.
    here's mine :D in case it's interesting :D
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    didn't have time to finish it though.

    P.S
    show your wires plz
     
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    Check this line with your car, there should be somewhat of an edge :)

    Other than that, nice!


    Seams OK - Seams not OK: 2 - 2 ;)
     

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    draw - yeah thx nighteye :grin:

    hmm i think there is no (sharp) egde, according to the reference pics attached.
    no reason not to improve my mesh. ;) crits are welcome.
     

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    I know it's no sharp edge, but it sure as hell is an edge as seen on that refs :)

    (that refs don't show the crease on the side though. Guess that one isn't there after all :) Probably just reflection on my refs)
     
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